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18 April 2008 @ 11:35 pm
#083 Undoing (Daniel/Vala)  
Title: Undoing
Fandom: Stargate SG-1
Characters: Daniel/Vala
Prompt: #083 Here
Word Count: 286
Rating: PG
Summary: If there was one thing Vala had never before allowed herself to be it was vulnerable.
Notes: Written for [info]100_women.

If there was one thing Vala had never before allowed herself to be it was vulnerable. She had seen so many lives destroyed because of the tiniest signs of weakness and she didn’t want to become another statistic on that side of things.

She couldn’t afford to be anything but strong and if that meant she had to disguise how she was really feeling even to her own mind then so be it. As long as she came out alive on the other end, she’d do whatever was necessary.

The cool, steel blue of Daniel’s eyes told her otherwise; that she didn’t have to hide anymore, that she wasn’t alone.

Extracting herself from Daniel’s embrace, to avoid the confronting look he was giving her, she shut her eyes and swallowed. She tried to ignore the burning in her heart and her soul and pushed it away to the depths of her mind where she stored all of the forbidden thoughts and memories that if left out for even just one other human being to see would bury her.

Daniel’s arm snuck around her shoulders, pulling her to him once more, and his gentle whispering in her ear almost undid her.

She broke free of his grip on her for the second time and put her head in her hands.

She wasn’t going to break. She wasn’t going to break. She wasn’t…

A tear slipped down her face and she sighed. It looked like the whole vulnerability had finally caught up with her. She should have expected no less.

It took her all of ten seconds to give in and return to Daniel’s arms.

Daniel’s eyes met hers, telling her all she needed to know.

“I’m here.”
 
 
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Luxuria_Oceanus: SGAR: Awwwwww[info]luxuria_oceanus on April 18th, 2008 02:57 pm (UTC)
Awwww ;.; *sniffles* I love my girls and their ability to make me pout *pokes you* Very purty, darling.
Meredith: Ronon and Keller[info]xfirefly9x on April 18th, 2008 03:11 pm (UTC)
*hands tissues* Awwwww. I'm glad you liked. :)
ithilcalen: Stargate; Daniel and Vala[info]ithilcalen on April 18th, 2008 04:21 pm (UTC)
Awwwww. ♥ That was so sweet. I love those two.
Meredith: Vala - daniel's office[info]xfirefly9x on April 18th, 2008 04:26 pm (UTC)
:) Thanks!
Jenny: renegade[info]berry_hearts on April 18th, 2008 05:24 pm (UTC)
I loved how the only dialog was Daniel saying "I'm Here."
I think that seemed very in character for him. :D
Meredith: Daniel and Vala - avalon[info]xfirefly9x on April 20th, 2008 11:32 pm (UTC)
:) Thanks. I'm glad you noticed the one line of dialogue. I thought it had more impact that way rather than putting in more.
Impossible Things: sg1 - daniel/vala: breathe in[info]6beforelunch on April 18th, 2008 07:06 pm (UTC)
So good! Great insights into Vala's character and Daniel at the end. *sniff* Perfect. It puts me in mind of the crying scene from Unending or the end of Memento Mori. Great job. :)
Meredith: Daniel and Vala - avalon[info]xfirefly9x on April 20th, 2008 11:39 pm (UTC)
Thanks! :)
Aly: {SG1} D&V hold[info]tenacious_err on April 18th, 2008 07:25 pm (UTC)
Oh man, I loved that. It was very touching. ♥
Meredith: Daniel and Vala - avalon[info]xfirefly9x on April 20th, 2008 11:42 pm (UTC)
:) Awww, thanks!!
Cynthia[info]greengategirl on April 18th, 2008 09:47 pm (UTC)
*sigh* I loved that a lot!
Meredith[info]xfirefly9x on April 21st, 2008 12:08 am (UTC)
*grin* I'm glad you liked!
smartoompaa[info]smartoompaa on April 18th, 2008 10:25 pm (UTC)
This was so amazing, you did such an awesome job potraying Vala!
Meredith: Vala - daniel's office[info]xfirefly9x on April 21st, 2008 12:09 am (UTC)
:) Awww, thanks so much!
crying in their sleep ;;: daniel + vala[info]odakota_rose on April 19th, 2008 05:43 am (UTC)
Beautiful, I love the way this flows, it's so Vala. And the ending *sigh*
Nice job!
Meredith: Daniel - crazy[info]xfirefly9x on April 21st, 2008 12:15 am (UTC)
:D Thaaanks!! *grin*
anna_sg1[info]anna_sg1 on April 20th, 2008 04:05 pm (UTC)
*sniffle*

Just beautiful!
Meredith: Vala - daniel's office[info]xfirefly9x on April 21st, 2008 12:26 am (UTC)
*hands tissues*

Thanks!
ubiquitous_girl[info]ubiquitous_girl on April 21st, 2008 12:53 am (UTC)
Aww...that's so sweet. ^.^ Loved it. ^.^
Meredith[info]xfirefly9x on April 21st, 2008 01:01 am (UTC)
XD Thanks!